Rebel Network LOGO! -Accepted-

I was corrected by Rplix and made THE Official Logo for United Rebels Of America, Rebel Network. All I need is Doug's approval for my logo so it can be used throughout the Rebel Network Community. The Logo itself is big, (I'll crop it later) so I need to post a link. Here it is:
Version 1
https://2img.net/h/i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff386/rebelslant/rnlogocd4.jpg

Version 2
https://2img.net/h/i1233.photobucket.com/albums/ff386/rebelslant/rnlogocd4-1.jpg

Version 3
Coming out soon!

This is awesome!!! Might want to make the green lettering a little darker green, its kinda hard to see

Wow, iv'e never heard Rplix say anything happy in a while... So here's my list of improvements I need to make:
1. Make the Green logo text greener/more to fit the surrounding brightness
2. Crop image to fit on forum
3. Add copyright notices; statuses
4. Adjust break feathering
5. Tweak lighting
6. Add HDR toning
7. Add shadows (If possible)
8. Increase HD for image

I will add more adjustments if you comment and reply down below. Thank you for your support.

The more "greener" lettering will come out in version 3. Version three will be finished by tomorrow on December 23, 2010.

Just a few things:

The logo looks great, however, It is also too complex. I think it needs fewer pieces of stuff being blown out of it.
also, the TM, R and copyright information needs to be removed since I dont hold the trademark on the logo. I'd rather not be in trouble with the law anymore than I already am.

Logo looks great though!

Douglas wrote:Just a few things:

The logo looks great, however, It is also too complex. I think it needs fewer pieces of stuff being blown out of it.
also, the TM, R and copyright information needs to be removed since I dont hold the trademark on the logo. I'd rather not be in trouble with the law anymore than I already am.

Logo looks great though!

Sure i'll remove the trademarks and the copyright information as with the "R".
For the fewer pieces blowing out, i'll try my best the lessen the amount of pieces.

It's looking better. I agree with Doug that the trademark should be removed and less lettering debris. Good job David Pham.